The world-building and explanation of the story line are severely lacking, as well. The dialogue is often unclear, especially when there are several characters speaking at once, and some characters never even get names but are simply referred to by their job titles, as though they really are nonplayer characters in a video game. This light novel originated as a web series, and the writing remains amateurish with a singular lack of proofreading. Left penniless, alone, and bitter, Naofumi must struggle to survive and has only his shield to help him save the world. As the Shield Hero, having the least impressive weapon, he begins his adventure with a decided lack of popularity and is betrayed on the third day of his adventure. Gr 7 Up-Naofumi Iwatani is a geeky college student who is transported to a role playing game-inspired fantasy world where he discovers he is one of four legendary heroes.
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